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Wednesday, September 18, 2019

The greatest library

Today in class me and my class had to do a piece of writing and I chose The greatest library of all this is what I wrote on a docs 


If a library appear in my living room I will freak out 
And then I touch a book the library will turn into a Greasy and grocer colours like grey and black together
And mixed up. I will scream and tell my mum and dad to get the out of here but Unfortunately dad
left the keys in the house and then I heard this house was the worst review house in the neighbourhood and under it said this even has a library and that is the house that I lived in so dad went inside and got the keys and that is unfortunate the car had no Patrol so we had to push the car Instead of driving it and the gas station was a Myer away and took us to night to day time.with out food and water until we got there and was 50 dollars but my dad had a 40 dollars. And dad said can we make it 40 dollars and the man said ok. Why no because we only have 40 dollars and I haven't had a job so can my dad work here yes he can. Get in your working dress and here we go let me get some money so we can buy gas and food to eat and will be a happy family together. But one night I had a dream that I was in the old house and got trapped in the library but there was only kids book and no Chapter books in the library
Kids book like the goose vs the fox who will win the goose or the fox
In the library.

What do you think about my Writing and did you had a library appear in your living room.

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