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Thursday, July 1, 2021

Writing T2 W9

 So today I did a writing task and I want to show you this activity was fun because I got to writing a cool story about it 


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Finally the day has arrived. Showtime day, we have been practising for months. I brought my clothes school but the bus was delayed. So I went walking but I got lost. I didn't know where I was until I found this old lady. I put on my black clothes and blended in with the dark and followed her. Then out of nowhere she disappeared in midair until I stepped on something. It felt like wood so I opened it and ran behind a tree and who came out? Was a killer clown

but he did not see me because of my black clothes and I blended in with the dark. So

when the clown went I went in and locked the wood and in it there were guns, rocket

launchers and lots more. I got a gun and a mini gun and when the clown opened the

door... Boom! right in the head I shot him and he died. Then I got out and I took some guns in case of danger. The day passed and I found a vampire and shot him but he was not dead the sun was coming up and he vanished. I continued with my mission to find the old lady but then I found the school. Everyone was a zombie even my best friend Nicholas and my favourite teacher Whaea Tamzin. I killed all the zombies and I knew it was that old lady. After a few days I found her this time. To end it I got my rocket launcher and Boom! I shot her and she died. 


Thanks for reading and see you tomorrow


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5 comments:

  1. Wow that is alot of writing good job.

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  3. You did lots of writing.
    You could add paragraphs if you want.

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  4. wow that is alot of writing.

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  5. Hello Ayushmaan, this is Nicholas. I really liked your story. Next time can you follow the steps and add a question? Anyway your story was great!

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