HI Ayushmaan I really liked your layout for your slideshow but on slide 4 there is some writing at the back of the videos in really big writing could you please fix it?
Hi Ayushmaan, great job completing this weeks slideshow. You have answered the maths questions well and clearly displayed your working out.
I liked looking through your planning slide for this weeks wero, I can tell you put a lot of thought into how your new character would look and what its abilities and weaknesses would be.
I enjoyed reading your writing task for this week. I thought you had written it well, but making next time you could make the text even bigger so it is easier to read or change the colour of the font.
Hi Ayushmaan, Nice job completing your work for this week, you have been an awesome friend to have in year 5, and hopefully you have what it takes to become a school leader, or a house captain. Stay Safe, Kieren
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HI Ayushmaan I really liked your layout for your slideshow but on slide 4 there is some writing at the back of the videos in really big writing could you please fix it?
ReplyDeleteHi Ayushmaan, great job completing this weeks slideshow.
ReplyDeleteYou have answered the maths questions well and clearly displayed your working out.
I liked looking through your planning slide for this weeks wero, I can tell you put a lot of thought into how your new character would look and what its abilities and weaknesses would be.
I enjoyed reading your writing task for this week. I thought you had written it well, but making next time you could make the text even bigger so it is easier to read or change the colour of the font.
Hi Ayushmaan, Nice job completing your work for this week, you have been an awesome friend to have in year 5, and hopefully you have what it takes to become a school leader, or a house captain. Stay Safe, Kieren
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