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Monday, June 29, 2020

Last week I did this writing and so here is it

writing. Once a upon a time there was a small man.In his home in bed after that he went outside. And saw a air balloon and was going on it.He went on it but it poped and he was falling to the ground but he ate a magical apple that spawned. A parachute on his back and he was alive the end.


thanks for reading and see you tomorow bye 

4 comments:

  1. A very cool piece of flash fiction Ayushmaan. I love that the magic apple spawned a parachute! Ka pai!

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  2. Hi Ayushmaan,
    I like your post but how did the man get the apple? Maybe you should make a part 2 on how he got the apple.
    From Frances.

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