Today homework was about writeing and I did a free writeing and this the wirteing that I did todays see
Once there was a man in the forest that was lost but had wood and found a cave to live in. he build a bow and some arrows that he made him self. To keep him protector and kill but he killed some animals to be alive and so he got some wood. to build a house and some days past and he went outside but that day a bear came and was about to eat him but he gave him a porkchop to eat and so the bear never came back and the man was still alive. But when it was winter he was cold so he build a camp fire to be warm for the rest of the winter. And then it was summer and it was sunny so he had no problem all day of his life the end.
hope you like it and see you tomorow
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