Writing W1 T3

 So today I did a writing about zoo are bad and I want to show you  

Introductions

R.T Describe the setting

Most people think that zoo animals are cared for and safe but they do not know

that they are harmed and miserable and want to get out

Firstly, conditions in zoos are often rather poor. Most

zoo animals are in enclosures and can become stressed

and anxious to get out. For example the worst zoo is in West

Africa. It does not feed the lions in the zoo.

Secondly, opponents of zoos claim that they are cruel. Zoo captivity is

causing more harm than good and pernicious at the worst. For example

the zoo in Africa is not feeding the animals and has poverty.

Thirdly animals are in unnatural environment.

So animals are in small cages and are stressed to get out. For example like in Africa

they have small cages on zoos so that is my opinion.

I strong believe that zoos are bad and they need to teach them by making bigger cages

and maybe let some of them out into the wild life.

This was fun because I love to write narrative

thanks for reading and see you tomorrow Bye

Have you made a paragraph before?