Writing

 So today I did a writing and I want to show you this activity was fun because the topic was creatures and animals

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“Run run” my dad says. “There is a dangerous creature”. I ran behind a tree and saw the creature running away’ but but dad got bitten by the creature and died. We went to his funeral crying in tears then I said “I will get revenge on the creature and kill him for good when I grow up” a few years have passed and I still remember the promise I said to my dad. On November 16th 1959 I packed all my bags and went hunting for that little monster. I went where my dad died and saw some footprints. I followed them and they lead to a cave.I went on top of the cave and saw the monster so enough was enough. I shot him but he dodged the attack and started chasing me. I got in the car and drove off. I looked behind me and he was gone. “Well that was a close call” I said to myself, but I  knew I had to watch my back for the rest of my life… to be continued 

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