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Thursday, March 18, 2021

Space work

 Today my topic was about space and I did writing as an option and this was the writing that I did I put my effort and it's so I hope you like it. 


Aliens aliens aliens all over the news I look at every news aliens are real real real But to me they are no real so since that I research about aliens so after some  and then I found something there is a unknown planet called Tamzin planet and apparently aliens spawn there this was big I said to myself so tomorrow I went to NASA and said I found were aliens  spawn and I told him everything and a hour has past and he said yes so tomorrow I got in to the suit and I was launched into space and then 2 days has past and I got to it  was a duplicated plant of earth and I forgot to bring any missile so do I went back to earth and made a missile that can explode a whole entire planet it took me more than 3 days to build it and then it was finished so I got into my space suit And got launched up “zooooom” I was into space so when I got there I let go of the missile and I went to the planet and k-a boom! the planet exploded. Oh yeah I forgot I knew why there were aliens they were trying to terrorise a our planet earth. The end


Thanks for reading and see you tomorrow Bye

2 comments:

  1. Nice work Ayushmaan. Next time remember to read over your work and include full stops.

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  2. hi Ayushmaan i really like your writing. i like it how you made it exciting. that you put a good start so then poeple are can read it and it is really exciting to read.

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