Hi Ayushmaan, nice work this week! You have done a great job answering the maths questions. I enjoyed watching your video about the project you created to improve the Pahurehure Inlet. You have done a good job with your chosen writing task. I think what you could have done next time is explain more WHY or HOW your project will improve the pollution in the inlet.
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Hi Ayushmaan, nice work this week! You have done a great job answering the maths questions. I enjoyed watching your video about the project you created to improve the Pahurehure Inlet. You have done a good job with your chosen writing task. I think what you could have done next time is explain more WHY or HOW your project will improve the pollution in the inlet.
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