So today I did a writing task and it was about a cat burglar and I want to show you!
Purpose:narrative
Audience: Nicholas
R.T add detail
7:00pm Tokyo 1975 The great cat crime
T.V turned and the news popped on (the great cat crime). Oh no there is a cat
who. Ate all the food!. This must be a fat cat? Time to go to the
police department. I jumped in my car and “vroom “vroom” in seconds
I went to Fuchu tokyo. I told them and they said what breeds I said a maine coon ok
we will try. Finding it and I said the crime was eating all the cat food in the warehouse.
“The police said Oh no” so they got to work they found the cat but it dashed far away so
the police knew it had a strategy so they found it again. But then saw it had a collar so they
found it again and went behind it and catched it they saw the name it was Nicholas! So the
consequence was 10 years in prison
Thanks for reading
and Have your cat done something wrong?
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