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So today I did a writing and I want to show you and My class had to infer about a to pictures and I chose on so I want to show you!
Hi my name is kaleb and I am a professional shotgun user and next week is the. Olympics and I am nervous because there is going to be a lot of audience watching us plus it is going to be raining that day so I have to. Practice my aim and how big the target is going to be so I got to work. I got my shogun and made a target. And it is time to practice so I went to a place where no one lives and started ‘boom’ I got a bulls eye and again and again I keep on getting bullseye but there was this bragger his name was billy he is alot richer than all of so the day came the Olympics day so I got there and beat down one and another one and another one until i got to billy we were tie 2 to 2 so I did this I did a backflip and got a bullseye I won because he could not do that so I won yay I won
Thanks for reading and see you tomorrow Bye
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