Today I did a writing and I want to show you this was fun because I got to learn how to persuade and I wan tot show you!
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Dear Mr Tetzlaff 23 Ray small drive
Papakura
2110
Hello I am writing to you today because I want you to change the timetable and make rubbish duty groups each day.
What I am saying is that we should have a late breaktime and a
late ending. Lunch should start at 12:50 to 1:30 with 10 minutes
eating time. Morning tea should be at 10:40 to 11:10. We have enough
time plus for the teachers because they get to spend more time talking to
each other. If we get a longer break time ,Us students promise to pick up more rubbish.
Thanks for reading and see you tomorrow
From Ayushmaan
Hello Ayushmaan, it's me Nicholas. I agree with you for having an extended lunch time. I liked how you said that if we have a longer breaktime, we have to pick up rubbish! Also check for any unexpected capital letters in your writing. Did you have fun writing this?
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