Great work this week. I like how you only included the texts you read this week and deleted the rest. I also like how you answered the questions about 1st and 3rd person.
I think you could improve your writing. You should have paragraphs e.g. Beginning, middle and end. Also remember to use speak marks (example: "hello") when a character in a story is talking. You also need to remember to include this weeks N.L and R.T, which can be found on the original teacher slides.
The superhero mask you made is also quite plain, maybe you could include a design or colour to it.
Here are some more labels you could have used for this blog post: reading, writing, maths, LCS, lockdown, online learning
I enjoyed your forward flip video. You'd make a good stunt person one day. I also recongnise the scene of Endgame that you re-wrote. It's one of my favourite scenes. Keep working hard.
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Kia ora Ayushmaan,
ReplyDeleteGreat work this week. I like how you only included the texts you read this week and deleted the rest. I also like how you answered the questions about 1st and 3rd person.
I think you could improve your writing. You should have paragraphs e.g. Beginning, middle and end. Also remember to use speak marks (example: "hello") when a character in a story is talking. You also need to remember to include this weeks N.L and R.T, which can be found on the original teacher slides.
The superhero mask you made is also quite plain, maybe you could include a design or colour to it.
Here are some more labels you could have used for this blog post: reading, writing, maths, LCS, lockdown, online learning
Hi Ayushmaan,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your forward flip video. You'd make a good stunt person one day. I also recongnise the scene of Endgame that you re-wrote. It's one of my favourite scenes. Keep working hard.