Hi Ayushmann, I like when you showed your working out on the ' how many plums does sid have' you induvidualy showed us how many plums sid got on each day. I also liked how you made the packaging in minecraft.
Nice work Ayushmaan, I like how you have shown your maths thinking when you answered the maths questions. I like how you used minecraft to create your food packaging, however I wonder how cardboard could last as a form of packaging for food...What happens if it gets wet? You have done a great job writing the recipe for the rainbow pancakes, just remember next time to split the method into steps. This will make it easier for the reader and will help to make sure they have not missed anything important.
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Hi Ayushmann,
ReplyDeleteI like when you showed your working out on the ' how many plums does sid have' you induvidualy showed us how many plums sid got on each day. I also liked how you made the packaging in minecraft.
good job you have good background but there no question and what you enjoy
ReplyDeleteHi Ayushmaan,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used minecraft to make you environmentally friendly packaging.
Nice work Ayushmaan, I like how you have shown your maths thinking when you answered the maths questions. I like how you used minecraft to create your food packaging, however I wonder how cardboard could last as a form of packaging for food...What happens if it gets wet?
ReplyDeleteYou have done a great job writing the recipe for the rainbow pancakes, just remember next time to split the method into steps. This will make it easier for the reader and will help to make sure they have not missed anything important.